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Bloodlust fueled by vain desire,
Power unchecked and ignored.
In your eyes burns endless fire;
I'm sorry that you were so bored.

Your boredom boiled into rage,
While I stood back and gazed.
You seem like a leopard in a cage,
Now more so in your last days.

I look back now, to find
You should have stopped with peasant girls.
Elizabeth, you put us in a bind,
With your giant blade that twirls.

Your iron maidens, sewing shears,
Bits of glass, and candlesticks
Brought about both death and fear;
Neither one too slow nor quick.

Your vanity is overwhelming.
©2008-2009 ~suicidalkisses
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Done for my Creative Writing class.
Paired with the last one, 'My Servant.'

Written about Elizabeth Bathory and her servant. This one is from servant's point of view, and her opinions of Bathory.


MINE.

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Oh, why thank you. =D
I thought it to be the better of the two.

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.Air-e-kuh.

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